You need a little work, deffinitly need to practice more, but you could make a few good songs, just have to find the right beat. Also need to show a little more motivation it seems like. Sounds like youre just muttering. You sound like a person i made a song with though, and i really i typically didnt like his songs but when we made one together it was good. So practice, right beat, and more emotion man, Also, some songs have the beat too high to where you can barely hear the vocals.
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