I don't know if I like the new recording of Genesis (to be renamed at completion). My upper register is a bit shaky in my opinion but the lyrics are evolving so I posted it. If anyone sees this, let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is appreciated!!!
Song writing is so new to me. I had the first verse to "I Tried" for a good 6 months before I figured out a chorus thanks to a friend who told me the little trick of reversing the chord progressions. Genesis is starting to come together, but it will have a new name when it does. I just called it Genesis bc it came in ooo la-la's and chords so it was a beginning. Would love to collaborate with other songwriters. Any takers?
My new song just came to me when I was playing with chords. I'm really excited about it; lyrics are starting to come :-)